Spring

A flower opens,
To the suns warming embrace.
Life awakes again...

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Dnavarre

Commented Apr 29, 2009, 11:44:12 PM

I'm not sure how you wanted the third line to go, but I always spread a word out, so I got 6 syllables there.

But a good haiku...although it doesn't seem to hit me right.

--edit--

Wait, I kept reading "awakes" as "awakens" so it's 5.

kt6550

Commented Apr 30, 2009, 2:52:30 AM

I do hate rating poetry.

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