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A prose poem by

Lonelyhearts1224

Submitted Jun 17, 2023, 1:01:24 PM
Edited Nov 8, 2023, 6:21:49 PM

O' Crescent Glow

O'crescent glow,
of suave allure,
candescent
vigil light.

Vouchsafe, 
a crystal dream, 
that I may purge, 
the solemn eerie night.

But if by chance, 
at dawn my ka,
in slumber
freeze awaits.

With plumage beings,
I bid ascend, 
to greet
my destined fate.

🌙written on:
July 12, 2022🌜

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Routh Avatar

Routh

Commented Jul 12, 2023, 4:59:45 AM

I like this, your imagery is very good and this flows well.

On the second line of the last stanza:

I bit ascend

Was this meant to be “I but ascend” or “I bid ascend”?