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A prose poem by


Submitted Feb 18, 2002, 6:00:17 AM

I Wish

My love for you is unconditional,
My love for you will never stop,
But I'm so confused,
I don't know where to start.

You took your love away,
And left me with nothing,
So, I'm left here so empty,
Full of doubt and confusion.

The emptiness is hard to bear,
Someday harder than others,
But the truth is,
No one can help me,
Not even my Mother.

It's something I have to face alone,
That's a simple fact,
Because I know your not in love with me anymore,
And I can never have you back.

But I wish one day that you would realize,
I'm the one that loves you most,
And then we could be together,
And make a little toast.

A toast to you,
A toast to me,
We could live happily ever after,
And baby makes three.

But that day will never come,
It's hard for me to believe,
But I know that you love another,
Even though she is there to decieve.

One day I hope you'll wake up,
And realize I'm the one,
Because I will always be here,
Even after your mind is done.

I hope that day comes, but if it doesn't,
I'll still be here waiting,
Alone - dreaming,

Just so you know, because I love you so,
I will be there till the end,
If not lovers and companions,
Always your BEST FRIEND!


risuta Avatar


Commented Dec 7, 2016, 8:06:11 AM
Read it few times and honestly still don't get it.
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Aviv Khasanah

Commented Dec 9, 2016, 1:07:18 AM
I agree with the previous comment. I don't really get it. What are you trying to say?
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Commented Feb 10, 2017, 11:45:53 PM
You've got a description, but no writing. You need to post the writing.