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Darkfire

Submitted Mar 23, 2010, 4:03:33 PM

He Ascends

*This is somthing i have NEVER done b4 but i just had the inspiration. Not meant to be offending to anyone, so if you're easily offended, just don't read i guess. Anywho, hope you like.lol




Leaving, the grace of his father,
becoming a man.
He gave us a hope for the future,
though born from the sand.
Wonders, performed through his father
proved him, the light.
A gift to mankind from his maker
a torch in the night.
Tempted, by a great evil,
testing his stand.
His reason, his faith, never waived,
feet firm to the land.
Stones were, tossed all upon him,
breaking his heart.
These creatures, forgive them, my father
he said, from the start.
Hung to, die as man's traitor
his followers cried.
The earth shook, the sky mourned, like people
God tearfully replied.
Softly, he enters heaven
pure like a dove.
So gentle, so clean, in the light,
shining above.
Sitting, up on his new throne,
we wait his return.
The trumpets will sound off as angels,
bring peace that we've earned.

Comments

Vermithrax Avatar

Vermithrax

Commented Mar 23, 2010, 6:25:31 PM
Very very good.

I can see this as a modern hymn.
Don Roble Avatar

Don Roble

Commented Mar 23, 2010, 7:33:07 PM
Outstanding.
Kerri-Emmitt Avatar

Kerri-Emmitt

Commented Mar 23, 2010, 9:07:08 PM
Wonderful... it even gave me goose bumps!
JonPWills Avatar

JonPWills

Commented Mar 24, 2010, 5:09:32 AM
It touched me in a very nice way. Thank you.
kt6550 Avatar

kt6550

Commented Mar 26, 2010, 2:33:51 AM
Very nicely written.
Elkie123 Avatar

Elkie123

Commented Apr 8, 2010, 3:55:21 PM
Fantastic, I'm touched!
optimisticynic Avatar

optimisticynic

Commented May 7, 2010, 2:32:41 AM
I also read this as a modern hymn. Absolutely beautiful...breathtaking. I LOVE it.
optimisticynic Avatar

optimisticynic

Commented May 7, 2010, 2:32:57 AM
I also read this as a modern hymn. Absolutely beautiful...breathtaking. I LOVE it.