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A romantic fiction story by

Prajakta Pendharkar

Submitted Aug 19, 2016, 7:19:41 AM

Happiness Redefined

This is basically how you feel when you are in lone and your partner is as much in love with you

The below stated things are totally and totally from the perspective of girls, ladies.
These things usually happen to girls when they are in love with their someone special.
There are drastic changes in life.
Some are good, some are bad.
Some make you happy
Some make you sad
Some change the meaning of life
Some change the meaning of you.
It happens for most of the feminine gender. Their life starts revolving around their love. Definition of life and happiness changes totally
 Now, Happiness becomes…..
Watching him sleep at ease like a baby
Watching him laugh and giggle like a child
The happy look on his face when he comes back from the office and you open the door.
Look in his eyes when they are full of love for you.
The way he appreciates you when you dress up specially for him.
When he likes something that you have cooked and just to tell you that he eats more that day.
When he gives you a surprise.
When you are having a fight and he says I love you just like that.
When he calls from office to tell you that he is missing you
Scolding also adds to happiness…
When he scolds you out of concern when you are careless
When he scolds you if you don’t eat food on time
Another scolding if you miss your medicine when ill
That angry look if you don’t wear a sweater when it is cold.
Concern for you doubles the happiness…
When without you asking him, he holds your hand while crossing the road
When he waits for you to begin eating the meal together
When he gives you the window seat because he knows you like the view
When he tries to cheer up your mood.
His happiness becomes yours…
You are happier than him on his professional success.
You are cheerful if he is cheerful
One of the best spectacle is seeing him enjoy anything to the fullest
Nagging can also be fun…
When he is constantly behind you to watch a particular movie,because he wants to see it with you.
When he tells you to wear particular colour clothes, because he loves that colour on you.
When he literally pushes you out of the kitchen because he wants to prepare something special for you.
And the list can be endless…
But yes it gives you immense happiness as you can see how much he loves you


Seanwhat Avatar


Commented Nov 6, 2006, 5:08:36 AM
You know, I am getting SO SICK of that fucking vulture, struttin' around like he owns the desert. Feathered asshole...
Oh, and your Haiku is well done. I very much dig it.
Jake Avatar


Commented Dec 11, 2006, 8:20:07 AM
Nice work. I like haikus. Anything about the desert reminds me of a poem by Stephen Crane, so I'll share it with you right now!

Stephen Crane:

In the Desert-
In the desert
I saw a creature, naked, bestial,
Who, squatting upon the ground,
Held his heart in his hands,
And ate of it.
I said, "Is it good, friend?"
"It is bitter - bitter", he answered,
"But I like it
Because it is bitter,
And because it is my heart."
abigailchilds Avatar


Commented Jun 28, 2008, 5:39:35 PM
It always amazes me that when you string just the right words together in just the right order you can draw the clearest picture in a persons mind. For you first attempt at haiku (a much braver feet than I willing to take on) you did really well. Keep going you seem to have a real knack for it.