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A sonnet poem by


Submitted Aug 23, 2007, 1:25:50 PM

As Silence Kills

His heart wants to tell

How your arms around him feels

His heart wants to yell

Yet this silence slowly kills

How could you not tell?

Your other love, the other thrill

 You have sent him to hell

Damn! Can you not tell?

To hell you have led him

So falsely, he sees the illusion of heaven

No worry, No regrets

Pray for him as he slowly rests

For the truth he knows

His love for you will never show


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Commented Apr 10, 2017, 7:40:34 PM
Very nice poem :)

"On a a near by hill" - nearby in on word (could be my british english).
pirate60 Avatar


Commented Apr 10, 2017, 8:45:33 PM
I totally missed that. I believe it should be one word.
astarte Avatar


Commented Apr 11, 2017, 7:00:31 AM
I really enjoyed reading it, pirate! Well done!
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Commented Apr 12, 2017, 3:32:02 AM
After fixing any more errors this will become my 6th book and 3rd picture book. Cross your fingers.
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Don Roble

Commented Apr 12, 2017, 3:59:56 PM
The usual high standard we hold you to.
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Commented Apr 17, 2017, 9:50:53 AM
Thanks Don. I always try to live up to the standards you set.