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A prose poem by

Carl_Tinman

Submitted Oct 27, 2008, 9:43:29 AM

Apart

APART

The eyes are not
your eyes, I look
in them & see
nothing

The face is perhaps
your face but
changed by passing time
I don't remember it
quite well

The voice is not
your voice, it is
the vodka speaking

I listen carefully, yet
hear nothing &
I realise

We are universes
apart

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maria c

Commented Jan 6, 2010, 4:46:47 PM
I really liked this, but feel the all words should be written out. I am referring to and instead of &.