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A general fiction story by


Submitted Nov 4, 2010, 7:15:31 PM


Just thumping the wall into oblivion. The concrete breaks under your angry fist. Your knucles bleed. Red specks float before your eyes. Rage burns through you, your sole emotion. You smash the balustrade. Jump off the building. Punch the face. Hop the fence. Shout. Scream. Your chest constricts. You start running, the sensation of the wind against skin is soothing. But the fire still burns, you slam your feet with consistent thumps. Your mind wanders back. You hit the tree, lift it above you and smash it into its consistuents. You kick the car window in and scream your name. Throw yourself into the car door. Admire the dent, think 'shit' then do it again. Run again - but along the tops of the cars. Go into the middle of the road. Kneel. Scream some more until your throat hurts. Lie on your back. Feel the tarmac, look across to the bottom of the tyres and the crystals of glass. Smile, laugh. Shout and scream and walk slowly back.


Don Roble Avatar

Don Roble

Commented Nov 4, 2010, 7:22:09 PM
I don't know what this is but I love it. Of course, when they catch up to you, it's back to the hospital.
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Commented Nov 5, 2010, 1:37:02 AM
lol Good comment Don.
And, of course, to court, to pay the damages to all of those cars!
Vermithrax Avatar


Commented Nov 5, 2010, 8:06:03 AM
Hmm - strange.

Powerful, evocative.

But still; very strange.