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A prose poem by

omarpier

Submitted Dec 5, 2016, 5:09:14 AM

An Anchor

I am an anchor
Attached to a big beautiful ship
Its sail opened wide
Catching all the wind she can gets
It would sail to the horizon
The ray whisper sweet call
But the ship wouldn’t move an inch
For an anchor hold her still

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kt6550

Commented Feb 10, 2017, 11:40:42 PM
Good description in this. You need to put some punctuation in to help with phrasing.