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A prose poem by


Submitted Mar 9, 2007, 6:20:36 AM


Do you know what it feels like
When days pass with nothing but silence
Nothing but sleepless nights and forgotten days
Watching time gradually pass by
Listening to your individual feelings
Wanting someone to talk to
Something to accomplish
Something that doesn't leave you misplaced
Sitting all alone within your head
Lingering inside your own thoughts
It feels like time without end
Even so you'll forever go on never knowing
That's why I'll forever carry on alone


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Commented Mar 13, 2007, 1:21:34 AM
This was well written. I would have likely listed this more as prose than a poem, but the emotional content and imagery were easy to grasp. I have experienced those feelings and found myself thinking those thoughts in the dead of night.
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Commented Mar 23, 2007, 1:23:50 PM
I've definetely felt that way...good poem though, I enjoyed it
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Scott Bolger

Commented Mar 3, 2009, 4:54:50 PM
Great job