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A prose poem by

sweet_temptation

 Submitted Oct 11, 2009, 8:43:37 PM

All Over Again

All over again



Last night I fell in love with you
All over again,
More deeply in love,
Than ever before.
No one has ever expressed their love for me
With such beautiful and kind words.

Last night I fell in love with you
All over again,
With such stronger faith
Than ever before.
Knowing that you will always be there for me
When dark shadows enter my life.

Last night I fell in love with you
All over again
With a stronger friendship
Than ever before
When ever I need a tender shoulder to cry on
I know you will wipe away the tears

Last night I feel in love with you
All over again
With more respect
Than ever before
I look up to you and admire your strength
In turn you have strengthen me

Last I feel in love with you
All over again
With such care
Than ever before
Now I truly believe how much you care for me
You have given me life.

Last night I fell in love with you
All over again
With more happiness
Than ever before
You have brought back to me smiles and laughter
Through your loving eyes.

Last night I fell in love with you
All over again
With more love
Than ever before
For the first time in a long time
I have really felt love.

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Don Roble Avatar

Don Roble

Commented Nov 14, 2016, 6:41:49 PM
Nice idea.
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Palupiskr

Commented Nov 15, 2016, 3:55:39 AM
It's so interesting how you are able to explore yourself to make this beautiful piece of writing inspired by a simple idea, which is Monday! The choice of words that you use also supports the building of emotions that I myself can relate with this Monday idea. Good job, girl!!
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Yuke Yovrinda

Commented Nov 18, 2016, 11:44:29 AM
A good idea that I myself have a new perspective related to monday. The important thing is I welcomed monday as nice and pleasant day
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kt6550

Commented Nov 18, 2016, 11:04:15 PM
This is very good. Excellent job.
risuta Avatar

risuta

Commented Nov 22, 2016, 12:38:19 AM
Thank you so much for all the kind comments. It really makes me happy if someone likes and can relate to my writing.
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contemplating

Commented Dec 4, 2016, 5:18:17 PM
Who expect a letter from Monday? In the middle of reading I got an idea that this letter was sent from you to yourself. But I was wrong. Love your fresh idea!
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contemplating

Commented Dec 4, 2016, 5:18:35 PM
Who expect a letter from Monday? In the middle of reading I got an idea that this letter was sent from you to yourself. But I was wrong. Love your fresh idea!
risuta Avatar

risuta

Commented Dec 5, 2016, 12:41:30 AM
@contemplating
I have never thought that it could read like I was writing to myself. But after re-reading it I guess you can read it that way too. :D
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AlexScribe

Commented Jun 14, 2017, 7:38:03 AM
Poor Monday! Everybody picks on Monday, but seldom as entertaining as this.

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