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A prose poem by


Submitted Mar 2, 2021, 1:24:20 AM

All About You

Its all about
you and that is true
you want too go and visit
but you want them too
come here too
make up your mind
and stick too it
we can't have them here
their is no room
most of your family
don't even know us
we don't even know if we
can trust!


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Commented Mar 3, 2021, 8:49:57 PM
An interesting rhyme. I am not quite certain that I understand, but I think you are targetting ignorance here.

I think you need to add some punctuation to impart a sense of timing.