arman020715 Avatar
A prose poem by


Submitted Jan 3, 2010, 5:48:27 PM

A white rose

On a green garden,
Under a blue sky,
There lies a white rose,
And you.

Angels music,
And an angel are you
Which from the sky you have fallen,
Just like a rain drop on a petal of that white rose,
Which is under a blue sky, on a green garden, But you;

You are like spring's first sprout,
Just like a button of that white rose that sprouts,
And that is ready to give her beautiness and all her love.
Because you have been born to love,
And I, I love you today and I shall love you always.


Don Roble Avatar

Don Roble

Commented Jan 3, 2010, 10:14:36 PM
It looks like you had to workto get this one. It would be better free-flowing.
Vermithrax Avatar


Commented Jan 4, 2010, 2:28:56 AM
Nice. I like this one.
Well done.
kt6550 Avatar


Commented Jan 4, 2010, 2:44:56 AM
Good job. Well done.