lifeponder Avatar
A prose poem by


Submitted Jan 21, 2016, 7:35:06 PM

A thought for the world

The world bleeds from the greed of those who wish to achieve.
Lost in our own creation, searching for a creator we can't see
oblivious to the damage, empathy lost as we believe in a false reality


Don Roble Avatar

Don Roble

Commented Jan 22, 2016, 12:31:48 PM
A bit short.
kt6550 Avatar


Commented Jan 22, 2016, 9:58:01 PM
A good point, but I agree with Don. You could elaborate.