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A prose poem by

mooshiez

Submitted Mar 8, 2007, 7:33:28 PM

"A Poem For You"

"A Poem For You"


I shall write you a poem.
The greatest poem ever written.
A poem that make men disdainfully sensitive,
And women gingerly brash.
A poem to manufacture transparent love;
To approach the obvious.
Bringing back the refinement of age.
A person's poem.
Conjuring lust into the dark,
And paralyzing all affection.
Dashing regret from the mind
With substitution of satisfaction.
Comforting sex with utterance,
While stabilizing thought.
A real poem.
Adhering to make believe.
And omitting sensibility.
Dispensing all secrecy,
And embracing everything else.
Articulation of grace.
Eloquence of intensity.
Stimulating all emotion,
Yet associating false pretense.
An unmitigated poem.
Something to be proud of.
Extraditing confusion and grief.
Comprising amenity.
For all adoration.
For all to endure.
A poem to kiss this era,
And call her
Mature.
A poem to compel you.
To fancy another remark.
To breathe life into your ears
And discharge all judgment.
I hope you like this poem,
Because here it is.....


Tara N. Smith©2007

Comments

Don Roble Avatar

Don Roble

Commented Nov 14, 2016, 6:41:49 PM
Nice idea.
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Palupiskr

Commented Nov 15, 2016, 3:55:39 AM
It's so interesting how you are able to explore yourself to make this beautiful piece of writing inspired by a simple idea, which is Monday! The choice of words that you use also supports the building of emotions that I myself can relate with this Monday idea. Good job, girl!!
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Yuke Yovrinda

Commented Nov 18, 2016, 11:44:29 AM
A good idea that I myself have a new perspective related to monday. The important thing is I welcomed monday as nice and pleasant day
kt6550 Avatar

kt6550

Commented Nov 18, 2016, 11:04:15 PM
This is very good. Excellent job.
risuta Avatar

risuta

Commented Nov 22, 2016, 12:38:19 AM
Thank you so much for all the kind comments. It really makes me happy if someone likes and can relate to my writing.
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contemplating

Commented Dec 4, 2016, 5:18:17 PM
Who expect a letter from Monday? In the middle of reading I got an idea that this letter was sent from you to yourself. But I was wrong. Love your fresh idea!
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contemplating

Commented Dec 4, 2016, 5:18:35 PM
Who expect a letter from Monday? In the middle of reading I got an idea that this letter was sent from you to yourself. But I was wrong. Love your fresh idea!
risuta Avatar

risuta

Commented Dec 5, 2016, 12:41:30 AM
@contemplating
I have never thought that it could read like I was writing to myself. But after re-reading it I guess you can read it that way too. :D
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AlexScribe

Commented Jun 14, 2017, 7:38:03 AM
Poor Monday! Everybody picks on Monday, but seldom as entertaining as this.