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A haiku poem by


Submitted Oct 20, 2019, 8:35:11 PM

A love story

Affection desired
Love friendship loyalty found
Chaos silence now


savage_cushions Avatar


Commented Mar 11, 2010, 3:48:38 PM
Terrific! There is a natural, effortless flow to your writing and you are so good at the scene-setting stuff
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Commented Mar 11, 2010, 3:50:18 PM
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Don Roble

Commented Mar 12, 2010, 1:09:42 AM
Love to see where you take this. Reads very easdily.
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Commented Mar 12, 2010, 2:15:33 AM
Well, let's see where it goes.
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Rob Kosy

Commented Mar 13, 2010, 4:44:59 PM
Fabulously written as always and, of course, engrossing.
Your work has a unique feel that, I think is hard to attain.
It's the same "feeling" I get when reading any of my established favourites, from Stephen King to James Patterson to Terry Pratchet.
Gonna read chapter 2 right now!
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Commented Mar 24, 2010, 6:22:02 PM
I am really enjoying this so far - It flows easily and pulled at me straight away.
Can't wait to see where this goes.

Oh and crepuscular is such a good word ;)
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Commented Apr 8, 2010, 8:51:08 PM
a-ma-zing :)
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Commented Dec 24, 2010, 7:14:06 AM
This is the first story of yours that i've read, and let me just say WOW!!!! Cant wait to read the next chapter.