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A prose poem by

truthserum887

Submitted Oct 26, 2006, 3:29:14 AM

A Girl With As Many Razorblades As You Shouldn't Have A Problem Getti

Girl you want filth
And I've got plenty of dirt on you
The alcohol can't clean the wounds
From the razor blades you use

And its all fun and games
Until you cut your veins
And its all fun and games
Until you die from the pain

You're gonna pay for the attention you get
For the names that you mention and regret
Because you get drunk and upset
Over the mess that you've made
Covered in the blood from the cut with the blade
Its all fun and games until you die from the pain

Girl you want drama
And I've got the show for you
The airwaves are filled with shows
That exploit people like you

And its all fun and games
Until you cut your veins
And its all fun and games
Until you die from the pain

Comments

Si-Shen Avatar

Si-Shen

Commented Oct 15, 2005, 12:53:55 AM
I think sometimes game designers think something thats already defined story wise, either from a movie or legend or history, equals a free ticket to a great game. Its always nice to see them actually take the time to build it into a game properly and play it out properly as upposed to applying that the gaming public KNOWS the story so well they dont need to be properly told it.
Mythbhavd Avatar

Mythbhavd

Commented Oct 16, 2005, 5:42:49 AM
I agree. Even with a story that may be well known, I love it when someone takes the time to really develop a storyline for the game itself. A good example is Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy. Here's a story that's been told in radio, book, two movies, television, and an old text based game. Each time the story evolves and each time it's great. Even the game had unique twists on the storyline and was quite playable without reading, hearing, or seeing the originals.