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A general fiction story by

risuta

 Submitted Nov 13, 2016, 4:16:44 PM

A fresh start

Dear you,

It's rather strange to write a letter to you. We haven't been on good terms for a while, and most people kind of despise you, but look, I'm here to make peace with you. I know you're pretty mad about a lot of things—like how people don't welcome you warmly every week and instead make memes that spread like wildfire in the internet about how shitty you are when meeting them, and in turn, you throw a tantrum to make them feel even worse. I don't blame you. You only want to be loved like people love your other friends.

You see, I'm sorry for having taken you for granted. Last week was horrible. People are horrified about things that have happened. Everyone is worried about things that will happen. Please don't let them down. I need you to cheer them up and give a fresh start. Maybe we can start all over again, and this time let's try our best to get everything right and have a good week ahead.

Thanks, Monday.

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Don Roble Avatar

Don Roble

Commented Nov 14, 2016, 6:41:49 PM
Nice idea.
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Palupiskr

Commented Nov 15, 2016, 3:55:39 AM
It's so interesting how you are able to explore yourself to make this beautiful piece of writing inspired by a simple idea, which is Monday! The choice of words that you use also supports the building of emotions that I myself can relate with this Monday idea. Good job, girl!!
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Yuke Yovrinda

Commented Nov 18, 2016, 11:44:29 AM
A good idea that I myself have a new perspective related to monday. The important thing is I welcomed monday as nice and pleasant day
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kt6550

Commented Nov 18, 2016, 11:04:15 PM
This is very good. Excellent job.
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risuta

Commented Nov 22, 2016, 12:38:19 AM
Thank you so much for all the kind comments. It really makes me happy if someone likes and can relate to my writing.
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contemplating

Commented Dec 4, 2016, 5:18:17 PM
Who expect a letter from Monday? In the middle of reading I got an idea that this letter was sent from you to yourself. But I was wrong. Love your fresh idea!
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contemplating

Commented Dec 4, 2016, 5:18:35 PM
Who expect a letter from Monday? In the middle of reading I got an idea that this letter was sent from you to yourself. But I was wrong. Love your fresh idea!
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risuta

Commented Dec 5, 2016, 12:41:30 AM
@contemplating
I have never thought that it could read like I was writing to myself. But after re-reading it I guess you can read it that way too. :D
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AlexScribe

Commented Jun 14, 2017, 7:38:03 AM
Poor Monday! Everybody picks on Monday, but seldom as entertaining as this.

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