Jack Avatar
A prose poem by


Submitted Dec 17, 2010, 2:44:28 PM


I shall not forget the five,
With shallow blue-green overlaid,
Faces of radiant soul and flesh so alive,
With shallow blue-green overplayed.

The five pairs of eyes,
Fade and dull yet still exist,
Under the blue-green dyes,
The memories, they twist.

Forgotten as they themselves forget,
Deepest brown is just a shade,
No more am I in their debt,
It is past a blue-green river I wade.

*sorry don, i realised that wasnt finished -ty*


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Don Roble

Commented Dec 17, 2010, 4:07:46 PM
Sorry, this makes no sense. 5 what?
the_nev_a_prospect Avatar


Commented Dec 17, 2010, 8:01:37 PM
Is it a sports players team number and the colours are the team colours?
Jack Avatar


Commented Dec 17, 2010, 9:09:55 PM
guess again
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Commented Dec 18, 2010, 12:48:47 AM
Oh well, he hasn't finished it! He said so!