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and///////a////////////i've
spilled////chalice/////tasted
the////////held////////life,
cup.//////by
///////////four
///////////hands,

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kt6550

Commented Mar 25, 2011, 8:21:48 PM

hypothesises - I think you mean 'hypothesizes.'

Good job. Nice observation.

Kerri-Emmitt

Commented Apr 2, 2011, 6:58:53 PM

This twists and turns as it goes a long and quite expertly so. I believe this is one of my favorites now.

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