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A prose poem by


Submitted Dec 1, 2016, 4:12:26 PM


silently approaches your hairy nest
yes, my old uncovered hole
the sea


Aviv Khasanah Avatar

Aviv Khasanah

Commented Dec 2, 2016, 5:02:48 AM
It is nice poem. But I don't really get the idea of your poem, actually. Is it about sex? Don't get me wrong. I just guess.
and what is kind of verse you use here? It is short, which is good.
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Commented Dec 2, 2016, 8:37:17 AM
@Aviv Khasanah
After I reread it... yeah, some people might have imagination of sex lol. It wasn't intended for people to get the exact meaning though. Free your imagination :)

Anyway thank you for the comment!
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Commented Dec 3, 2016, 2:13:04 PM
Lol I didn't even get that sense of sex tho before I read the comments box. I'm guessing that you are talking about your old feeling that you have been kept for a long time and somehow now you re-open it. Nice work!
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Commented Dec 3, 2016, 2:31:49 PM
i can hear the cherry popping <3
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Commented Dec 3, 2016, 3:27:27 PM
Yay for another point of view! I'm stunned, you got the message. Now what to do. I'd never expected for people to understand the lines.

Well, free your imagination!
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Commented Dec 3, 2016, 3:31:30 PM
where's my prize then? lol kidding. can't wait for your next works!