A prose poem by
Submitted Dec 1, 2016, 4:12:26 PM
silently approaches your hairy nest
yes, my old uncovered hole
Commented Dec 2, 2016, 5:02:48 AM
It is nice poem. But I don't really get the idea of your poem, actually. Is it about sex? Don't get me wrong. I just guess.
and what is kind of verse you use here? It is short, which is good.
Commented Dec 2, 2016, 8:37:17 AM
After I reread it... yeah, some people might have imagination of sex lol. It wasn't intended for people to get the exact meaning though. Free your imagination :)
Anyway thank you for the comment!
Commented Dec 3, 2016, 2:13:04 PM
Lol I didn't even get that sense of sex tho before I read the comments box. I'm guessing that you are talking about your old feeling that you have been kept for a long time and somehow now you re-open it. Nice work!
Commented Dec 3, 2016, 2:31:49 PM
i can hear the cherry popping <3
Commented Dec 3, 2016, 3:27:27 PM
Yay for another point of view! I'm stunned, you got the message. Now what to do. I'd never expected for people to understand the lines.
Well, free your imagination!
Commented Dec 3, 2016, 3:31:30 PM
where's my prize then? lol kidding. can't wait for your next works!
"What I like in a good author is not what he says, but what he whispers."
Logan Pearsall Smith
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