It is nice poem. But I don't really get the idea of your poem, actually. Is it about sex? Don't get me wrong. I just guess. and what is kind of verse you use here? It is short, which is good.
@Aviv Khasanah After I reread it... yeah, some people might have imagination of sex lol. It wasn't intended for people to get the exact meaning though. Free your imagination :)
Lol I didn't even get that sense of sex tho before I read the comments box. I'm guessing that you are talking about your old feeling that you have been kept for a long time and somehow now you re-open it. Nice work!
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Aviv Khasanah
and what is kind of verse you use here? It is short, which is good.
contemplating
After I reread it... yeah, some people might have imagination of sex lol. It wasn't intended for people to get the exact meaning though. Free your imagination :)
Anyway thank you for the comment!
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hviturhiminn
contemplating
Yay for another point of view! I'm stunned, you got the message. Now what to do. I'd never expected for people to understand the lines.
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Well, free your imagination!
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