Thank you both for your feedback it's much appreciated.
zero commented on the story titled Break Though by Hexe
Aug 17, 2015, 7:53:17 AM
I'm definitely not one to talk, but there are many clear grammatical errors that you should go back and touch up. They are pretty hard to miss. As far as dialogue goes it's pretty stiff. Try to...
zero posted the story titled Two
Aug 17, 2015, 7:32:28 AM
A simple test to see if i have any writing potential. I am not a writer i cannot stress that enough.