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Zaix
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Zaix posted the poem titled The Forest.
A description of a forest, not sure what this is; so I will put it under Prose like the rest.
Zaix replied to the discussion titled Music
Might as well,
Angerfist, Evil Activities, Hard Creations, Nosferatu & Endyiom, DJ Mad Dog, Stone Sour, Nightwish ( Tuomas Holopainen in particular ), Opeth, Eric Clapton, Epica, Abba...
Angerfist, Evil Activities, Hard Creations, Nosferatu & Endyiom, DJ Mad Dog, Stone Sour, Nightwish ( Tuomas Holopainen in particular ), Opeth, Eric Clapton, Epica, Abba...
Zaix posted the poem titled The Waterfall
A short piece of "Prose Poetry" about a waterfall; again.
Zaix commented on the poem titled Cut by 11santa1
Goodbye to all those,
Who broke my heart,
You're to blame for,
Killing my fresh start,
I think that could do with changing to
Goodbye to...
Zaix commented on the story titled Living Dangerously by hobnogs
It's not bad man, few points with it I don't like. I think you could change the description of the trains to Metaphor instead of the Simile, and miss out silvery or white.
But overall it is...
But overall it is...
Zaix commented on their poem titled The Waterfall Bird
Thanks Pyscho, and yes the bird is a symbol for a human parent.
It was written about a girl who had an abortion; but birds having abortions aren't very common,
It was written about a girl who had an abortion; but birds having abortions aren't very common,
Zaix joined The Den
Zaix posted the poem titled The Waterfall Bird
A short piece of text about a Waterfall and a Bird.
Submitted Writings
The Forest.
A prose poem by ZaixA description of a forest, not sure what this is; so I will put it under Prose like the rest.
The Waterfall
A prose poem by ZaixA short piece of "Prose Poetry" about a waterfall; again.
The Waterfall Bird
A prose poem by ZaixA short piece of text about a Waterfall and a Bird.
