"Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart."
-- William Wordsworth
yuly marina
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yuly marina commented on the poem titled Unwanted by Mochamad Bintang Arrival
I can't catch the meaning of the last 2 sentences in your poem. Maybe you can explain it.
yuly marina commented on the poem titled Doomsday by Pila Namhcar
I agree with arumgumelar,
Then I still confuse to interpret the meaning of your poem. What do you mean with the word "lies" here?
Then I still confuse to interpret the meaning of your poem. What do you mean with the word "lies" here?
yuly marina commented on the poem titled In sum by Galuh Ayu Anggaratri
haha it is the short poem,but it has deep sense. You don't need to cut your hair, maybe you can express your feeling, even it will hurt him. Nice poem :)
yuly marina commented on the poem titled Doomsday by Pila Namhcar
Does your poem tell us about social life or about the end of human life?
yuly marina commented on the poem titled A Glimmer of Hope by Meesafiktri
@meesakfitri Yaaa I know that an easy structure and I understand about it, but maybe you have to pay attention to the punctuation. Perhaps, you can put the word "why" before "I keep in this situation"
yuly marina posted the poem titled I Miss Him
Sometimes exprees our feeling to someone is very difficult
yuly marina commented on the poem titled A Glimmer of Hope by Meesafiktri
If it is true why
I keep in this situation
@meesakfitri those two sentences make me confuse to interpret the meaning of this poem. Maybe you have to pay close attention to the...
I keep in this situation
@meesakfitri those two sentences make me confuse to interpret the meaning of this poem. Maybe you have to pay close attention to the...
yuly marina commented on the poem titled Baymax by Yuke Yovrinda
@yukeyovrinda yah I a gree with @nurwanti How did you get the idea? I am so curious. I think your poem can be the choice to describe Baymax. This is the unique thought.
yuly marina commented on their poem titled I am a Zero
@galuh @mufa thanks for giving me feedback. :)
yuly marina commented on the poem titled Friends Mean Everything by Meesafiktri
@meesakfitri, yaaa friends are everything. I think you need to put some imagery words. Imagery words make you feel the sense of what you want to express. Maybe you can use your emotion by giving...
yuly marina posted the poem titled I am a Zero
I am nothing........
yuly marina commented on the poem titled CLOSER by Meesafiktri
I think it is a good poem. You want to express that you love him, Is it right?
May be you can divide your poem into some stanzas. Keep it up :)
May be you can divide your poem into some stanzas. Keep it up :)
Submitted Writings
I Miss Him
A prose poem by yuly marinaSometimes exprees our feeling to someone is very difficult
I am a Zero
A prose poem by yuly marinaI am nothing........
Stay or Go
A prose poem by yuly marinaI wish someone will stay even he knows the lack of yorself
I am Fine
A prose poem by yuly marinaExpress your feeling, even you are in pain.
Stop Wondering About You
A prose poem by yuly marinaIn certain moment, your lover will come, but sometimes he will go without news.
Your Secret Admirer
A prose poem by yuly marinaDedicated to someone
