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Wortleyhen commented on the story titled Chapter 13 (cont...) by Mike L B
Some speech marks have been missed out. Great writing, very evocative and well structured.
Wortleyhen commented on the story titled A strange Enchanted love story by ShaneH
Problems with tenses noted. I did read to the end although I the ending was predictable. It was like reading the outline of a novel rather than a short story. If the writer took one little section...
Wortleyhen commented on the story titled Vulcan by SpringOnions
I like this a lot. But I was thinking that the long chat they had over a communication channel was unlikely to be so smooth in the desperate circumstances - but would work as he was suiting up...
