"Writing is no trouble; you just jot down ideas as they occur to you. The jotting is simplicity itself, it is the occurring which is difficult."
-- Steven Leacock
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Vermithrax commented on the story titled War World Chapter 1 Revenge (part 1) by lushxxl
Enjoyable - though a little on the short side. I would hope that this is an introduction to something larger,and that all will, in due course, be explained.
Now:-
as they rolled a...
Now:-
as they rolled a...
Vermithrax commented on the poem titled The Hate We're Breeding by wstone1994
A thought-provoking piece - and well constructed, overall.
I am of the opinion that any written set of guidelines - which I consider most religious treatises to be, are open to both...
I am of the opinion that any written set of guidelines - which I consider most religious treatises to be, are open to both...
Vermithrax posted the story titled Ripples - Four
Reflections
Vermithrax commented on the story titled Tea And Vengeance by man_raised_by_puffins
Nicely paced - I hope this is an introduction to a larger, wider piece.
The imagery here is sharp, and the dialog smooth and cogent. This is nice work, with a few minor grammatical errors...
The imagery here is sharp, and the dialog smooth and cogent. This is nice work, with a few minor grammatical errors...
Vermithrax commented on the poem titled The Crown Of My Love by golden dust
Thank you; that is now a very emotive and accomplished piece.
Well written
Well written
Vermithrax commented on the story titled That Sweet Nectar. by common
Nicely done, me old matey - arr. :)
Vermithrax commented on the poem titled Smoke by the_nev_a_prospect
Emotive, evocative; and possibly the best writing of yours, I have thus far read in the Den.
Excellently done.
Excellently done.
Vermithrax commented on the article titled Family Essay ( Third Draft ) by DesertRat
Evocative, and well written.
Excellent work.
Excellent work.
Vermithrax commented on the poem titled The Crown Of My Love by golden dust
A heartfelt homage to a true love.
I like the empathy this provokes.
The one thing that I would say, is that possibly the second stanza might benefit from being broken into six...
I like the empathy this provokes.
The one thing that I would say, is that possibly the second stanza might benefit from being broken into six...
Vermithrax commented on the story titled Test Post by Dante
Too deep for me, Dante. :)
Vermithrax commented on the poem titled The mystery creature... by Elkie123
Very clever Elkie; you had me guessing!
Vermithrax commented on the poem titled I can't think of anything by Elkie123
Funny, and quite original.
Well done Elkie - but take a look at the spelling mistake in the second line.
You'll see it.
Well done Elkie - but take a look at the spelling mistake in the second line.
You'll see it.
Submitted Writings
Ripples - Four
A general fiction story by VermithraxReflections
Ripples - Three
A general fiction story by VermithraxInterlude
Ripples - Two
A general fiction story by VermithraxShadows
Ripples - one
A general fiction story by VermithraxAmelia
Tears of Cassandra - Part 12 - 13
A fantasy story by VermithraxBrand
Spirit Guide - 12
A fantasy story by VermithraxNexus
Tears Of Cassandra - Part Eleven
A fantasy story by VermithraxHope
Heart And Soul
A general fiction story by VermithraxThis is a repost and a re-working of a story entered in the competition.
Knaves Gamble 25
A fantasy story by VermithraxMy indulgence
Spirit Guide - 10 & 11
A fantasy story by VermithraxJenna
Tears Of Cassandra - Part Ten
A fantasy story by VermithraxMythos
Tears of Cassandra - Part Nine
A fantasy story by VermithraxTook me a while to get back to this - I hope its okay.
