"Every author in some way portrays himself in his works, even if it be against his will."
-- Johann Wolfgang von Goethe
Veins
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Veins commented on the story titled Essence Chapter 0 by ozcartheninja00
That was well written. I have no complaints, but I'm surprised Jailor didn't poke Sam's eyes out, I was expecting that at one point when he started talking about his eyes.
Veins commented on the story titled PainLove by AncientYouth
Wow. This is freaking brilliant. The dialogue is something I'm envious of. It begins vague yet specific, the kind of opening I'd expect from myself or a character in a dream.
+ what kt said...
+ what kt said...
Veins commented on the story titled Angel by DesertRat
This sounds like something that actually happened to you - you say in the description that it did, and you've conveyed it well. The descriptions themselves are just the right amount of vivid; I...
Veins commented on the poem titled sales serpent by Glory
Awww, kt :( I was finding this informative, but I guess extending this debate all over one poor writer's work would be unfair. We could move this kind of discussion to somewhere more appropriate...
Veins commented on the poem titled sales serpent by Glory
"Big beautiful women". The acronym for it is something I discovered ... well, you can probably guess.
Why is this something a writer shouldn't do? Do cryptic messages make it too hard to...
Why is this something a writer shouldn't do? Do cryptic messages make it too hard to...
Veins commented on the poem titled sales serpent by Glory
Maybe she meant BBW?
Veins commented on the poem titled life by Angus Gold
Well written.
I'm never sure what criticism to offer for writing like this, being more of a story-teller than an actual writer, however:
"This can't of happened, not to him" should...
I'm never sure what criticism to offer for writing like this, being more of a story-teller than an actual writer, however:
"This can't of happened, not to him" should...
Veins commented on the story titled The End - Chp 1 (Rewrite) by aussj4link
I haven't read the original, but when I saw a recently posted new "chapter 1" I was pretty happy to read.
It's well written, by the way. Should I bother checking the earlier...
It's well written, by the way. Should I bother checking the earlier...
Veins commented on the story titled KarmaKiller by Vermithrax
"the cold fire of my rage is heat enough."
If the juxtaposition of "cold" and "heat" were intentional it doesn't help the mood I think you're trying to create. It sounds satirical, and laughed...
If the juxtaposition of "cold" and "heat" were intentional it doesn't help the mood I think you're trying to create. It sounds satirical, and laughed...
Veins replied to the discussion titled Ultimate Questions
Is it deer?
Veins replied to the discussion titled Accessible Authors
Wow. I took a glance at that site and I'm interested enough to get or borrow some of these books now. You can never go wrong with interactivity...
Veins posted the poem titled The Jellyfish Poem
A work in progress. No need to take this seriously, just enjoy.
