TrisnaAprilia commented on their poem titled Heaven
Dec 10, 2016, 3:12:48 PM
@Feny F Dewi : Actually I didn't think about twilight when I was writing it. Umm may be I can make it as lyrics but I can't think about the chords. Thank you :D
@Aviv: Yes, actually I wrote...
TrisnaAprilia commented on the poem titled Hana by ruby ernawa
Dec 8, 2016, 4:04:51 PM
Hana. Does it refer to someone's name or the Japanese language which means flower or Korean language which means one? :D
TrisnaAprilia commented on the article titled Lir-Ilir: Dolanan Song of the Javanese by Nurwanti
Dec 7, 2016, 11:31:22 AM
Anytime... ;) Umm may be the value of nationalism? :)
TrisnaAprilia commented on the poem titled Your Youngest Daughter by Meesafiktri
Dec 7, 2016, 8:04:12 AM
Oh.. very touching. 0.0 You put some repetitions, it's nice, but I think "I am ready" would be better. :)
TrisnaAprilia commented on the poem titled A Dreamer by Aviv Khasanah
Dec 7, 2016, 7:56:43 AM
It may also happen to procrastinators. Hehe :D
TrisnaAprilia commented on the poem titled A Dreamer by Aviv Khasanah
Dec 7, 2016, 7:55:38 AM
Apt! Tragic ending for someone who spend his/her life by only dreaming without struggling to make the dreams come true.
TrisnaAprilia commented on their poem titled Salt
Dec 7, 2016, 7:49:37 AM
@Nurwanti Thank you ;)
TrisnaAprilia commented on their poem titled Salt
Dec 7, 2016, 7:49:09 AM
@Palupiskr Thank you :) As you know I love cooking and salt is the most common yet the most important ingredient in cooking, so I chose it to be the imagery of this poem. Hehe ;)
TrisnaAprilia commented on their poem titled Salt
Dec 7, 2016, 7:46:39 AM
@Aviv Thank you. :) The word these refers to the regrets The three periods are to emphasize "salt" and "the word" and to make it more dramatic obviously. :D
TrisnaAprilia posted the poem titled Heaven
Dec 7, 2016, 7:42:35 AM
When you are in love
TrisnaAprilia commented on the article titled Lir-Ilir: Dolanan Song of the Javanese by Nurwanti
Dec 6, 2016, 10:40:52 AM
I personally love Javanese traditional songs so much and I like your analysis on Lir-Ilir. Your explanations are quite clear. What about Javanese traditional lullaby entitled "Talelo Lelo"? It also...
TrisnaAprilia commented on the poem titled Hot Chocolate by tissyrinulawwal
Dec 5, 2016, 7:00:15 AM
I can see that you are one of chocolate lovers...like me :D