"A desk is a dangerous place from which to view the world."
-- John le Carre
Tolemak85
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Tolemak85 commented on the article titled Why Write? by Don Roble
Good points. Thanks for the wisdom.
Tolemak85 commented on their story titled To Be Named Later
Thank you. I will add that to my list of personal errors to keep an eye on.
Tolemak85 commented on the poem titled Yes, I Am A Human Being by patsyflem64
Strong and impressive. Only thing I can think of after reading this is the line. "Nice Guys Finish Last" Keep up the good work.
Tolemak85 posted the story titled To Be Named Later
Deeds and plots from the past start to boil over and push two souls over the edge.
Tolemak85 commented on the song titled Damn Doctors by flickeringfairy
Cursing and Swearing are sometimes the only way to express ones self. Anger coming to a boil, and just as fast as the water boils into a steam to escape into the air. So to, do Curses and Swears...
Tolemak85 commented on the poem titled Memories of Him by Fictitiously imaginative
I agree with Both Don and Mad. It's like looking at the flash of a gun barrel. We see the potential and like what we see, but where is the bullet and where is the target? I would love to help out...
Tolemak85 commented on the poem titled Wishes by Lonelyhearts1224
The Concept stayed on track (100%) and your Imagery and Vocabulary near perfect to me (90%). I will be the first to admit I am not the greatest when it comes to Spelling and Grammar, so I will give...
