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-- Ray Bradbury
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stringbenderr posted the poem titled werewolf
transformation curse
stringbenderr posted the story titled The Other Dimensions; Pertama Ulottovuus (chapter 9)
A new dream, and a new fright.
stringbenderr posted the story titled The Other Dimensions; Pertama Ulottovuus (chapter 8)
A very dark cave of mysteries.
stringbenderr commented on the story titled Pyro; Chapter 5, Transformation by ozcartheninja00
As always, I enjoyed this.
crushing its spine as if was a fragile piece of glass.- seems to be a missing word here...
and his his smile- seems to be an added word...
crushing its spine as if was a fragile piece of glass.- seems to be a missing word here...
and his his smile- seems to be an added word...
stringbenderr commented on the story titled no wonder by nimsun
I am glad to see you finally posted Nim. As I said, the Den is here to help.
This is a touching story, good job.
You should post your story on here. :D
P.S. As I said befor, I...
This is a touching story, good job.
You should post your story on here. :D
P.S. As I said befor, I...
stringbenderr posted the poem titled The never ending hoard of zombies (Call of Duty: World at War)
Just a little something I came up with after playing some Nazi zombies.
stringbenderr commented on the story titled Pyro; Chapter 4, Awakening by ozcartheninja00
Wow, very good. I did not expect that.
I noticed a few spots that could have been paragraphed.
Such as- "Suck it up; stop being such a wuss about it." Harmony replied, scooping up...
I noticed a few spots that could have been paragraphed.
Such as- "Suck it up; stop being such a wuss about it." Harmony replied, scooping up...
stringbenderr commented on the story titled Pyro; Chapter 3, Savior by ozcartheninja00
Wow, very exciting.
There is little to nothing bad to say about this. Great flow, and the imagery is nice.
Awaiting the next chapter
There is little to nothing bad to say about this. Great flow, and the imagery is nice.
Awaiting the next chapter
stringbenderr commented on the story titled Obsessed (Part 2) by 11santa1
As the others said, please paragraph.
below is an example of the comma placement I mentioned on part 1-
That night I found out your whole house smells like vanilla.
That night, I...
below is an example of the comma placement I mentioned on part 1-
That night I found out your whole house smells like vanilla.
That night, I...
stringbenderr commented on the story titled Obsessed (Part 1) by 11santa1
Well, as said, this is really short. Maybe combine the first and second parts?
I noticed alot of spots a comma would be usefull. And I think I saw a few incomplete sentences as well. Also...
I noticed alot of spots a comma would be usefull. And I think I saw a few incomplete sentences as well. Also...
stringbenderr commented on the story titled Pyro; Chapter 2, Fear by ozcartheninja00
She wore a short dark blue skirt-should be. She wore a short, dark blue skirt
This is very good, I didn't expect the girl to show up. It was a little short though, maybe try expanding the...
This is very good, I didn't expect the girl to show up. It was a little short though, maybe try expanding the...
stringbenderr commented on the story titled Pyro; Chapter 1, Devastation by ozcartheninja00
Nice, a fire demon is a great idea.
A few spelling errors I noticed. And as vermithrax said, the "him" and "it" should be one or the other.
Can't wait to see the plot for this :D
A few spelling errors I noticed. And as vermithrax said, the "him" and "it" should be one or the other.
Can't wait to see the plot for this :D
Submitted Writings
werewolf
A prose poem by stringbenderrtransformation curse
The Other Dimensions; Pertama Ulottovuus (chapter 9)
A fantasy story by stringbenderrA new dream, and a new fright.
The Other Dimensions; Pertama Ulottovuus (chapter 8)
A fantasy story by stringbenderrA very dark cave of mysteries.
The never ending hoard of zombies (Call of Duty: World at War)
A prose poem by stringbenderrJust a little something I came up with after playing some Nazi zombies.
The Other Dimensions: Pertama Ulottovuus (chapter 7)
A fantasy story by stringbenderrA few more answers, and a very dark place.
The Other Dimensions: Pertama Ulottovuus (chapter 6)
A fantasy story by stringbenderrThe mysterious man answers a few question.
The Other Dimensions: Pertama Ulottovuus (chapter 5)
A fantasy story by stringbenderrA new arrival shocks Richard.
The Task of Posession
A prose poem by stringbenderrdon't know why I only write the dark ones lol.
The Dying Light
A prose poem by stringbenderrI couldn
The Other Dimensions: Pertama Ulottovuus ( chapter 12 )
A fantasy story by stringbenderrhmmmmm, someone isn
The Other Dimensions: Pertama Ulottovuus (chapter 11)
A fantasy story by stringbenderrA little bit of work and a spectacular display.
The Other Dimensions: Pertama Ulottovuus (chapter 3)
A fantasy story by stringbenderrA giant creature and a plan. Final draft.
