sthompson22 commented on the roleplay titled The Archer Chronicles Episode 054 by Elijah Archer
Jan 11, 2010, 3:57:37 PM
This is funny! It's the first episode I've read so I don't know the characters history but it was easy to pick up the story.
sthompson22 posted the story titled Close the Deal
Oct 15, 2009, 5:16:14 PM
Can Brad save a critical account and keep his young rival at bay?
sthompson22 commented on the story titled Rhythmic Desires.07 by daydreamer08
Sep 23, 2009, 3:49:09 PM
I really liked the Romeo & Juliet discussion. This is the first chapter I read so I had trouble following parts of the story. I must go back and read earlier chapters.
sthompson22 commented on the story titled universe neurotic by Miss Munigant
Sep 23, 2009, 3:28:26 PM
This is very deep. I had some difficulty following the flow but the symbolism is nice.
sthompson22 posted the story titled The Girl (part two)
Sep 22, 2009, 12:17:14 PM
An incident with a bicycle brings back an old memory
sthompson22 commented on the story titled Fool's Errand - 14 by Vermithrax
Sep 11, 2009, 7:47:30 PM
Interesting plot. Now I have to go back and read previous chapters.
sthompson22 commented on their story titled The Girl (Part One)
Sep 11, 2009, 3:22:48 PM
You're correct Vermi. It's been a long time but I tried to bring in personal experiences from high school.
Part two jumps to a different period in the character's life.
sthompson22 commented on the story titled A Chest Full of Memories by Eldarwen
Sep 10, 2009, 5:55:49 PM
The twist at the end is good. I would liked to have read more about how Annie felt at discovering Joshua's secret. Did he provide any explanation? The story seemed to end abruptly.
sthompson22 posted the story titled The Girl (Part One)
Sep 10, 2009, 4:40:05 PM
Jack finds the girl of his dreams. Or so he thinks.