"Storytelling reveals meaning without committing the error of defining it."
-- Hannah Arendt
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slackmeaux commented on the story titled INSIGHT by AlexScribe
I am not much on thrillers, but you put this together nicely. There are some uncommon words I had to really think about, but your story line made it kind of easy to figure out. All in all, I'd say...
slackmeaux commented on their story titled Revenge not Justified
Thanks again, Alex for your honesty. At first, my story didn't have this prologue, but I decided to write it to give the reader an idea of how she got to the point she is at.
So much death...
So much death...
slackmeaux commented on the story titled (Fixed)Angel Squad chapter 1 by Bstout89
I agree with the paragraphs comments. I also agree that this is an interesting start. You do have some missed punctuation marks throughout the story and spelling errors.
'... cuts two black. --...
'... cuts two black. --...
slackmeaux commented on their story titled Revenge not Justified
Thank you Alex for your comments. I just wrote this book a month ago. I have my family slowly proofreading it for me. This prologue is just to explain how she gets to the point she is at. The...
slackmeaux posted the story titled Revenge not Justified
What do you do when what seems impossible happens right before your eyes? When life throws a knockout blow and you are so dazed you can’t tell which way is up? That is what happens to Nikki. Now...
slackmeaux commented on the story titled It Doesn’t Snow Here In The South So What’s That White Stuff? by Don Roble
:D. Loved it.
