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Shane

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  • Joined: Dec 4, 2016, 3:25:20 PM
  • Last Seen: Dec 9, 2016, 11:11:00 AM
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Shane commented on the poem titled I Wish I Could by truetildeath
Dec 9, 2016, 10:45:08 AM
Nice @truetildeath
But I think it would be better if you pay attention to the rhyme.
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Shane commented on the poem titled Irreversible Melancholy by Nurwanti
Dec 9, 2016, 10:40:05 AM
Superb! Your writing is very rhythmic. I'd say I could feel the melancholy side here
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Shane commented on the poem titled Arrogantly by Nurwanti
Dec 5, 2016, 2:41:20 PM
You don't need to be so overly dependent on rhyme, @nurwanti
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Shane commented on the poem titled Arrogantly by Nurwanti
Dec 5, 2016, 1:06:43 AM
I really like how you give a matching rhythm through the suffix -ly here,
Nice work there!
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Shane commented on the article titled A Review of by Nurwanti
Dec 4, 2016, 3:29:12 PM
Gangs of newyork, i know this one. well done. you give just right plots analysis
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Shane joined The Den
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