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Shane commented on the poem titled
I Wish I Could
by truetildeath
Dec 9, 2016, 10:45:08 AM
Nice @truetildeath
But I think it would be better if you pay attention to the rhyme.
Shane commented on the poem titled
Irreversible Melancholy
by Nurwanti
Dec 9, 2016, 10:40:05 AM
Superb! Your writing is very rhythmic. I'd say I could feel the melancholy side here
Shane commented on the poem titled
Arrogantly
by Nurwanti
Dec 5, 2016, 2:41:20 PM
You don't need to be so overly dependent on rhyme, @nurwanti
Shane commented on the poem titled
Arrogantly
by Nurwanti
Dec 5, 2016, 1:06:43 AM
I really like how you give a matching rhythm through the suffix -ly here,
Nice work there!
Shane commented on the article titled
A Review of
by Nurwanti
Dec 4, 2016, 3:29:12 PM
Gangs of newyork, i know this one. well done. you give just right plots analysis
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