"Poetry is a deal of joy and pain and wonder, with a dash of the dictionary."
-- Kahlil Gibran
Roberts536
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Roberts536 commented on their story titled Lilly
Ah yes - corrected. Thank you for the comments :)
Roberts536 posted the story titled Lilly
A shift in perspective is the fastest way to change.
Roberts536 commented on the story titled The Rob Saga Chapter Two REVISED by Don Roble
A fun tale - I laughed at the man spitting on Rob's hand. Enjoyed most once they had reached the camp. I thought it had character. At the beginning there was a lot of screaming and 'the man' -...
Roberts536 commented on their story titled Before the Show
It's an experiment in using the falcon as a way of making a character come alive. Perhaps extending it is worth a shot - thanks for the suggestion.
Roberts536 posted the story titled Before the Show
Sweeping in like a falcon...
Roberts536 commented on the story titled FRIEND'S TRAP by Just_A_Myth
Good story, enjoyed the plot and felt the characters coming out. Would be much improved by better general English i.e. spelling and grammar. Also taking a bit more time to make it clear exactly who...
Roberts536 commented on the story titled The Virus by bill801
A story that has a good 'feel' to it, in the sense that a good image is created about the world that the main character lives in. A couple of points that I would say could do with...
