I do feel that it was doing that but it's an old poem and I have no idea what my past self was thinking. It's like when I write a poem now, it feels entirely different from how I wrote poems before...
ravensky posted the poem titled Come back
Feb 2, 2015, 9:09:50 AM
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ravensky commented on their poem titled Moving On
Jan 30, 2015, 4:49:59 PM
But, you see I took this from my previously written poems. Even I find flaws in it, yet for the sake of keeping a tag on my progress, I make it an effort to keep them as they are-even when showing...