Psychodelicate

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Joined: Feb 16, 2009, 1:45:29 AM
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Preferred Language: en

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Psychodelicate commented on the poem titled The Waterfall Bird by Zaix

Mar 11, 2009, 12:32:12 AM

The description and imagery is great! My only advice: "The mothers lament echoed out across the pool, piercing through the silence of the surrounding jungle." That way you're not using the word...

Psychodelicate commented on the story titled The Return of the Damned by MrailTydor

Mar 10, 2009, 10:20:15 PM

Wow, impressive!!

Psychodelicate commented on the story titled A Twist in Christmas Season by daydreamer08

Mar 1, 2009, 11:53:43 PM

I really like the idea and am anxious to see where this goes! With a little editting to help the dialogue flow better, you'll have a very strong story!

Psychodelicate commented on the story titled Found Melody(tentative). Preface to Chapter 2 by daydreamer08

Feb 24, 2009, 12:51:31 AM

Great start! It kept me interested and it seems like you've got a good idea. My advice would be to work on describing the setting a little more. But you've done a great job making the reader feel...

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