Palupiskr commented on their poem titled A Nice, Warm Place
Dec 5, 2016, 2:49:03 AM
@Nurwanti just free your imagination :) Maybe the las comment before you could help you find the answer
Palupiskr commented on the poem titled Beneath The Beauty by maulanaray
Dec 4, 2016, 3:34:39 PM
Woa I'm amazed with this poem. It makes me reflect on what people usually set for that standard of beauty. Maybe one may look fine outside, but who knows what they feel inside? good job , love it!
Palupiskr commented on the article titled Is It Possible? : Birthday Cake without Candles by Nurwanti
Dec 4, 2016, 3:31:01 PM
Nice article! It also gives me some new information that I've even never thought about before.
Palupiskr commented on their poem titled A Nice, Warm Place
Dec 4, 2016, 3:28:05 PM
@Saw233 Originally, I wasn't intended to write about something like what you've inferred. What I meant by 'Father' in this poem is the portrayal of the 'God'. But don't worry, everyone is allowed...
Palupiskr commented on their poem titled A Nice, Warm Place
Dec 4, 2016, 3:23:23 PM
@stmufarrohah thank you. and yes, congrats you got the meaning that I want to deliver !
Palupiskr commented on their poem titled Silence
Dec 4, 2016, 3:20:30 PM
@nurwanti sometimes silence makes us feel lonely and empty, right? that's actually what I want to epress using the word "hollow" :)
Palupiskr commented on their poem titled You
Dec 4, 2016, 3:17:20 PM
@stmufarrohah thanks for your input :)
Palupiskr commented on the poem titled Me every night by Galuh Ayu Anggaratri
Dec 4, 2016, 5:18:41 AM
It's so sad :( But you succeded in bringing my emotions into your writing tho. Good job!
Palupiskr commented on the poem titled How can I by maulanaray
Dec 4, 2016, 5:15:07 AM
Woa I love the second stanza sooo much! And the rhyme makes it even better. Such a sweet poem!
Palupiskr commented on their poem titled Under the Same Heavy Rain
Dec 4, 2016, 5:12:45 AM
@Galuh haha really? Sorry for making you fell that way, I guess? :p yea that idea kind of suddenly popped up in my mind and I thought it's not that bad. Glad you like it
Palupiskr commented on their poem titled Who Are You?
Dec 4, 2016, 5:11:11 AM
@Galuh it seems so simple yet it takes a long time to really know our own identity :)
Palupiskr commented on their poem titled Silence
Dec 4, 2016, 5:10:13 AM
@Galuh yea, I've also been telling myself about that. Silence is not always "cold" righ?