Nina Charles

A young woman undergoes a metamorphsis.

Thank you Falling-silence for enlightening me and please forgive me fabellara01 for leaving a comment which was ingnorant. I did a little research and based upon what a haiku is it looks like you...

hmmm, i'm not sure if this just went over my head or what? i think i need a little more to sink my teeth into and chew. Looking at the title and reading the poem I can't find any connection to...

Here is our serial.....take this wherever you want, please only one chp at a time copy, paste it and update it with your addition. First Addition: Chapter 2

A forest animal befriends a young boy and in turn ends up being an ally in the fight of his life.

Great imagery. The introduction paragraph, to me, doesn't really sound like your voice and can really be left out. you cover all the basis later and throughout the story. That's the only change...

An interesting story. I wish you went into the danger a little more surrounding her almost getting shot. I believe the story would be stronger with a fuller plot, something for the reader to...