"Science fiction encourages us to explore... all the futures, good and bad, that the human mind can envision."
-- Marion Zimmer Bradley
Nequam95
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Nequam95 commented on their story titled The ghost of time - Chapter 2
Thank you very much for your review! I will do my best with the grammar, although its not among my strengths.
Nequam95 commented on the story titled Renn in Jamaica by kt6550
Great story! I think Renn deserved what he got.
Nequam95 posted the story titled The ghost of time - Chapter 2
Michael tries to kill Imahara Kotara on the starcruiser Kegare.
Nequam95 commented on the story titled The Rob Saga Chapter One by Don Roble
Poor Rob, he will never smell the same again. I enjoyed this story, I agree with the previous reviews. I like Robin Hood and all that, although - as a foreigner - I found it difficult to understand...
Nequam95 commented on the poem titled My Reality by aSin
Great poem! It made me think.
"no where" - nowhere
Also, when this line comes "It was in these times oh how i wished i could hold you close to me", I think it would be better to use "when"...
"no where" - nowhere
Also, when this line comes "It was in these times oh how i wished i could hold you close to me", I think it would be better to use "when"...
Nequam95 commented on their story titled The ghost of time - Chapter 1
Thank you for your advice, I really appreciate it! I think the first chapter of a book should be as good as possible, so if someone says there is nothing new or original in it, I really get curious...
Nequam95 commented on the story titled The Old Gods - Beginning the journey (chapter 1, full) by phillips_brian
Interesting start, i like the concept of the story. You made a lot of effort in telling the background, maybe a bit too much. Almost nothing happens in here, you just explain things, then the story...
Nequam95 commented on the article titled Who are we? by W namsom
You have to work on your grammar, especially on the commas. I don't know if you copied it wrong or something, but you have to do something with this. The story itself is not that bad, I'm not a...
Nequam95 commented on their story titled The ghost of time - Chapter 1
Thank your very much for your review! What do you think, how could I make it more original? What would make the concept and the plot itself better in your opinion?
Nequam95 commented on the story titled Ancestor Chapter 1: Xaine by Nexeus
I agree with the previous comments. I like the story so far, there are some interesting ideas in it. Although I have to add, this is a going a bit slow for my taste.
Nequam95 commented on the story titled Kansas by Don Roble
Interesting. As a European, I dont know much about Kansas, but it seems right in my opinion. I think a bit more story would be useful in here, but its completely fine in its own merits.
Nequam95 commented on the story titled Happiness Redefined by Prajakta Pendharkar
It made me think. As a man, I can't know for sure how women feel like when they are in love, but i think this gives a good insight to their emotions.
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The ghost of time - Chapter 2
A science fiction story by Nequam95Michael tries to kill Imahara Kotara on the starcruiser Kegare.
The ghost of time - Chapter 1
A science fiction story by Nequam95I've lost everything in the war. My love, my homeland and my friends are all gone. But hope is not lost. I've found a Timeship, the last one in existence, and with it, I am determined to take back all that life took from me...
