"As a writer, I sit all day, working at a word processor, reading books on auto theft, or doing telephone research."
-- Sue Grafton
MissDartit
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MissDartit commented on the poem titled In Praise of Mediocrity by Saad El-Asha
I am a bit late to the party, but this was an excellent little poem to read :) A good pace and great imagery. Keep it up :)
MissDartit commented on the poem titled Untitled by pirate60
I agree with kt :) a few philosophic stanzas. Very good. You should expand it :)
MissDartit commented on the story titled The Fall of Kings - Chapter 3 by IndecentAccident
a good chapter . :)
I liked the tension created in the beginning as they wandered around in the darkness of the caves.
The story is developing and will be fun to see where it goes :)
I liked the tension created in the beginning as they wandered around in the darkness of the caves.
The story is developing and will be fun to see where it goes :)
MissDartit commented on the poem titled Random Rhyme Stanzas by pirate60
Been a while since I have read anything from you pirate :)
A lovely and funny rhyme as always. Brought back some childhood memories :)
A lovely and funny rhyme as always. Brought back some childhood memories :)
MissDartit commented on the story titled House of Memories 4 by aussj4link
Haha, yeh was the same way when I started out writing.
Don't have to pay people to do it :P
Don't have to pay people to do it :P
MissDartit posted the story titled Home Coming cont..
So tried to expand on the short story Home coming.
MissDartit commented on their story titled Home Coming
Ah, Cheers. Corrected it :)
MissDartit commented on the story titled The Fall of Kings - Chapter 2 by IndecentAccident
A good chapter, I do like it when the story reveals som drops of information here and there. It is a good way of telling a story when you feel like you are learning alongside the characters.
MissDartit commented on the story titled House of Memories 4 by aussj4link
It is a good story so far, could do with some proofreading though.
The woman, with one green eye, glared at Alan as she said, "These people don't know what they're talking about...
The woman, with one green eye, glared at Alan as she said, "These people don't know what they're talking about...
MissDartit commented on the article titled Destructo by IndecentAccident
A short but good read. I imagine he is lying on the sofa in the psychiatrist's office giving his rant.
MissDartit posted the story titled Home Coming
A short story on home coming. It has been 3 years since I have written anything other than academic papers so bare with me.
MissDartit commented on the story titled The Fall of Kings - Chapter 1 by IndecentAccident
A good beginning. It has a good flow and it will be interesting to see where it goes.
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Home Coming cont..
A fantasy story by MissDartitSo tried to expand on the short story Home coming.
Home Coming
A fantasy story by MissDartitA short story on home coming. It has been 3 years since I have written anything other than academic papers so bare with me.
Farewell
A general fiction story by MissDartitSince it has been a while since I have written anything I decided to try a Fiction writing exercise called story to a song to warm up. The idea as you might have guessed is to pick a song and write what ever story that comes to mind. The Song I used for this exercise is called "Farewell Life" by...
