"Read a lot. Reading is how you develop critical judgment as a writer. It's also one way, and quite possibly the best way, of learning technique."
-- Diana Gabaldon
Madhatter
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Madhatter commented on the story titled Vampire Bats by Don Roble
I loved the line, "this is fun despite being destructive and aggressive to the ego"
The story read like a believable conversation between children. I could see flecks of truth in them...
The story read like a believable conversation between children. I could see flecks of truth in them...
Madhatter posted the poem titled Rythmic Desire
A bit of a sensual poem... not for the young minds.
Madhatter commented on the story titled The Hunted - Prologue (concept writing) by Burlylizard
This needs an editing, I agree with Don. Trust our audience, you don't have to write a descriptive of every step your character takes.
some examples:
Educed, should be induced.
I...
some examples:
Educed, should be induced.
I...
Madhatter commented on the poem titled Release & Realize by rdm88
I agree with KT, with this style there needs to be punctuation. Aside from that, quite the visionary in words.
Madhatter commented on the poem titled only you my rose by peggibee
very endearing.
Madhatter commented on the poem titled Alive by Yours truly
this is very passionate, and very much relatable. good job
Madhatter commented on the story titled The Mortician's Assistant- Revised by Don Roble
There might be a glitch in the submitting of writings. Some of your sentences ended up repeating.
A light atmosphere to a usually intense subject, haha. I smiled and laughed when I read...
A light atmosphere to a usually intense subject, haha. I smiled and laughed when I read...
Madhatter commented on the poem titled Porcelain Doll by Lonelyhearts1224
so weird, I left a comment, and it didn't save.
I shall try to recall: This felt like a horror scene, I loved how tormented the doll was at the thought of being discarded. Normally dolls...
I shall try to recall: This felt like a horror scene, I loved how tormented the doll was at the thought of being discarded. Normally dolls...
Madhatter commented on the poem titled A love story by Lindochka
I loved reading this out loud. such power in such a short writing. thank you.
Madhatter commented on the story titled Together They Won by Samir
This is the beginnings of an inspiring story.
I must be honest. The transition from Chandipur to the flashback down memory lane, is a bit confusing to me. What business did the people unite...
I must be honest. The transition from Chandipur to the flashback down memory lane, is a bit confusing to me. What business did the people unite...
Madhatter commented on their poem titled That Thing
Thanks Don, I appreciate the feedback! You are one of the honest reviewers on this site. :)
Madhatter commented on their poem titled That Thing
Thank you Darkfire, Im excited to be back :)
Submitted Writings
Rythmic Desire
A prose poem by MadhatterA bit of a sensual poem... not for the young minds.
That Thing
A prose poem by MadhatterWho knew I would have to say... me too.
Again
A prose poem by Madhatterconstant foe.
lines
A haiku poem by Madhattermy attempt at one..
Peggy's Journal Entry Four: My submission to Boney G's Jour
A thriller fiction story by MadhatterA writer that used to roam the Den named Boney G, started a Journal written during the time of the Zombie Apocalypse, He asked different writers to add en entry to the journal, with their take on character(s). This was a fun exercise and really challenged. I miss some writings that are long gone.
Humanity
A prose poem by MadhatterHow far we have come...
Office space
A general fiction story by MadhatterThe many annoyances of life...
Bridled
A prose poem by Madhatter...to be anything but today.
