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lichtyd

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  • Joined: Sep 11, 2016, 1:01:08 PM
  • Last Seen: Jun 15, 2018, 12:05:20 AM
  • Preferred Language: en
  • Location: South Central Pennsylvania, USA

Biography

If I were a clever writer, this would be an awesome place to demonstrate my skill.

I am a married male, in my late 50's. No children, but a small horde of former stray cats and one beleaguered dog. My wife is supportive and usually willing to proof read a chapter, if I make breakfast.

I do most of our cooking. From smoking meat on my grill, to baking cheese cake. My cheese cake is so good, that if I were single, I could use it to seduce interested females.

Writing is a new hobby, I started June of this year (2016).

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lichtyd commented on the story titled The view from the hill by RachaelSarah
Sep 18, 2016, 10:26:03 PM
I liked your paragraph. :...each one was a different life in the world." I would have left out, "was". But, it is a good sentence and it gave a nice sense of scope.
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lichtyd commented on the story titled A Long Walk by AbsentAuthor
Sep 18, 2016, 10:19:08 PM
Nice imagery, I got a good sense of the scene. The first paragraph had me confused, I thought that two people were present. I can get the image of the pot siting on the stump, but my initial...
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lichtyd commented on the poem titled Untitled by Evelyn_Honeybill
Sep 11, 2016, 4:40:37 PM
I first read the second line as, "In fact she was QUITE claustrophobically-small." On my second pass, I read it correctly.

My apologies Evelyn, for not rating your work. My experience with...
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