"A word is not the same with one writer as with another. One tears it from his guts. The other pulls it out of his overcoat pocket."
-- Charles Peguy
ladylunaivy
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ladylunaivy commented on the poem titled a part of me by rechacha
This piece, to me, is so very beautiful. It pulls at my soul and yet leave a cold slither of ice in my heart. Giving up yourself for your love.
Nicely done.
Nicely done.
ladylunaivy commented on the story titled The Curse, The Cure Ch2 by ozcartheninja00
You did a great job at introducing Grace. I really enjoyed reading this and can not wait to read more. Excellent. Keep it coming. ^^
ladylunaivy commented on the story titled The Conqueror of Nirvana by RiddlesinMercuri
I like the thought you have here. Very interesting.
It is kind of hard to read though. If you double spaced between paragraphs it would make it so much easier.
All in all though...
It is kind of hard to read though. If you double spaced between paragraphs it would make it so much easier.
All in all though...
ladylunaivy commented on the poem titled Materialisim by Marwa
Well put. ^^ I have to say a agree entirely.
A good poem.
A good poem.
ladylunaivy posted the story titled Totem
After writing the short piece Totem of Earth I thought about how I might take that vision and make a story out of it. Perhaps this is the beginning?
ladylunaivy posted the story titled Totem of Earth
How I crossed paths with my earth totem.
ladylunaivy commented on the story titled Tut tut by Jack
As kt said, a little short, but very interesting. The imagery was great. I could almost feel the nervous chaos of the man.
ladylunaivy commented on the story titled Fish Fingers by Damian Black
... Now that was ... beautifully twisted.
A few little things here and there, nothing that a good proofreading would not fix up.
Other then those few things it was a good little...
A few little things here and there, nothing that a good proofreading would not fix up.
Other then those few things it was a good little...
ladylunaivy commented on the story titled Bridging Gaps Chapter 6: The Cost of Fuel by Darkfire
nicely done. always love to read another chapter in this story. keep it coming. ^^
ladylunaivy replied to the discussion titled The Counting Game
ladylunaivy commented on the story titled Bridging Gaps Chapter 4: The Scent of Fear by Darkfire
Nicely done. Always getting better and better.
Can't wait to see what happens next. ^^
Can't wait to see what happens next. ^^
ladylunaivy commented on the poem titled The Lupine by Unseelie_girl
Wow! ... just wow. I love it. Beautiful visualization. Well done. ^^
Submitted Writings
Totem
A fantasy story by ladylunaivyAfter writing the short piece Totem of Earth I thought about how I might take that vision and make a story out of it. Perhaps this is the beginning?
Totem of Earth
A fantasy story by ladylunaivyHow I crossed paths with my earth totem.
The Blue Eyed Demon
An autobiographical non-fiction story by ladylunaivyThe Demon
Revenge (Part 14)
A fantasy story by ladylunaivyTime to practice. A friendly little spar never hurt anyone ... right?
Revenge (Part 13)
A fantasy story by ladylunaivyChoose your weapon.
The End The Beginning
A fantasy story by ladylunaivyAt the advice of many of the talented minds within the Den I decided to post my ... rant/story/blurb ... in the writing section after making a few minor little tweaks here and there.
Dark of the Moon
A general fiction story by ladylunaivyBeen strugaling to write as of late, but was digging myself out from all the snow we have gotten here as of late and there was this crow just sitting there watching me. The crow is one of my spirit animals and, well this little thing just popped up.
Ignoring One's Self (finished story)
A general fiction story by ladylunaivyI began writing this a few days back. I was not sure if I was even going to continue with it then suddenly the entire stoy came to me as I sat down to do a little writing. I reposted the first part, the orriginal, and finished off the story.
Revenge (Part 12)
A fantasy story by ladylunaivyA plan for salvation?
Ignoring One's Self
A general fiction story by ladylunaivyA moment in a schizophrenic mind.
Revenge (Part 11)
A fantasy story by ladylunaivyThe collar ... and Kasai's past comes back to haunt her.
Revenge (Part 10)
A fantasy story by ladylunaivyKasai gets a gift.
