LaCount Neun The She Wolf commented on their story titled The Killing Fields
Mar 6, 2010, 2:42:17 AM
I went through and tried to fix it a bit like you guys said. Thanks for rating and commenting. I hope it flows a little better now:D
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LaCount Neun The She Wolf posted the story titled The Killing Fields
Mar 5, 2010, 8:06:45 AM
This is the prologe/intro thing to my novel thing. I don't know about the title and don't think it will stay what it is. But here it is.revised a little from the first post.
This is the prologe/intro thing to my novel thing. I don't know about the title and don't think it will stay what it is. But here it is.revised a little from the first post.