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kt6550 commented on the story titled Storm Caller (work in progress) by Crimson Sky
"Karla, a slightly plump girl with extremely curly hair. " This is an incomplete sentence. You have a few of them in here, you may want to do a good, hard edit and clean them up.
"...white...
"...white...
kt6550 commented on the poem titled There goes a prey's prey: by Saad El-Asha
You are allowed to post here, including poetry.
kt6550 commented on the poem titled There goes a prey's prey: by Saad El-Asha
A very true observation. It made me think of "The Conqourer Worm," by Poe.
kt6550 commented on the poem titled My late night meets your early morning... by Saad El-Asha
Interesting thought here. A rather different take, following on the heels of "Big Stupid Cow Eyes."
kt6550 commented on the poem titled Big Stupid Cow Eyes by Sol
I don't know if this is poetry, it is very free-form. I would venture to say, however, that someone is in love. :)
kt6550 commented on the poem titled Superhuman by heRi
Very good poem here. I really like the timing and pace.
kt6550 commented on the story titled An Old Man's Story by Crimson Sky
Well, it is very short. However, it seems as if it begging to make it longer. Why not do so?
You have some mixed tenses in here. You need to clean that up. On the plus, very good imagery.
You have some mixed tenses in here. You need to clean that up. On the plus, very good imagery.
kt6550 commented on the story titled The God-Killer by Narval971
Okay, a few things.
You have a good plot here. You could very easily expand and develop this. Nice job.
Now, the issues.
You need to format this. It makes it much easier to...
You have a good plot here. You could very easily expand and develop this. Nice job.
Now, the issues.
You need to format this. It makes it much easier to...
kt6550 commented on the story titled Punk fRidaYs #000301 by rdm88
Oh wow. This is really dark and really scary. Nice job.
Now the bad side. You need a bit of formatting on this.
Now the bad side. You need a bit of formatting on this.
kt6550 commented on the poem titled Atavism by Saad El-Asha
Superb. Sadly, I fear, only a dream.
kt6550 commented on the poem titled For All You've Done by CWTilton
Perhaps, not so much a poem as a prayer?
Very nice.
Very nice.
kt6550 commented on the story titled Hillshrine by BartTilton
"As the enemy captain road away ..." this should be "rode away" You have several examples of this in this posting.
Try some formatting and double-spacing. It is easier to read and easier for...
Try some formatting and double-spacing. It is easier to read and easier for...
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Dash: National Sweat Pants Day
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National Bootleggers Day
An essay article by kt6550This is the product of a Dash.
National Maintenance Day
An essay article by kt6550A bit of fun.
A White Christmas
A general fiction story by kt6550A man tries to get home for Christmas
2-A Ghost Story
A general fiction story by kt6550Conclusion to Part 1. A different type of ghost story.
1-A Ghost Story
A general fiction story by kt6550A different sort of ghost story.
Don Roble
An essay article by kt6550A brief statement on a long-time Den member, Don Roble
A Passage
A fan fiction story by kt6550A bit of fan fiction, based on Frank Herbert's "Dune" novels.
Providence
A general fiction story by kt6550Providence is a small town at the edge of the West Texas Badlands. It has a Christian name. But how Christian is it?
Renn in Jamaica
A horror story by kt6550Renn comes to a bad end in Jamaica
Current Observations Concerning the Dreyfuss Behaviour
A general fiction story by kt6550Based on a Dash. Something a bit different.
