JoshuaCrimson commented on the poem titled Godzilla by pirate60
Dec 4, 2020, 5:32:48 PM
I loved this. Amazing.
JoshuaCrimson commented on the story titled The Snake by Don Roble
Dec 4, 2020, 7:33:58 AM
I never saw Snakes on a Plane, but this sounds a lot like it.
JoshuaCrimson commented on the story titled Providence by kt6550
Oct 27, 2017, 4:20:53 AM
A well-written story. I love your writing. Great imagery!
JoshuaCrimson commented on the story titled Red head vs demons by Mad world
Oct 26, 2017, 8:26:04 PM
I'm sorry, but this is hard to read. You have an interesting concept here, nice descriptions, but you need commas, and periods in this piece to end the run-on sentences.