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Thanks again AlexScribe. I really do appreciate your critiques. I don't know how many times I proofed it before posting. This is why it's always better to get others to proofread your work. I'll...

Thanks very much AlexScribe! I have now posted a much revised Chapter One.

I'm looking forward to everyone's critiques.

Thanks wolfexplorerz, Don Roble and AlexScribe for your comments. I have posted a revised Chapter One, and would definitely appreciate everyone's critiques.

This is hilarious! I can relate. Take it from someone who recently had a quadruple bypass. I went for pretesting as I was scheduled to have laser surgery to remove several large kidney stones. They...

This story is set in Scotland, and this is reflected in some of the terminology and spelling. You will also find the occasional Scot's Gaelic word or phrase used, but never without explanation.

I really enjoyed this captivating story, and would dearly love to follow A’Van’s adventures. There are so many questions to be answered. I believe you have a series in the making here. Well...

Thanks AlexScribe for your comments. Very helpful indeed. I have made the changes you suggested, and yes "coos" are cows. lol. Please, keep on "nit-picking"!

Thanks Wolfexplorerz for your kind words. There is definitely more to come. :)

This story is set in Scotland, and this is reflected in some of the terminology and spelling. You will also find the occasional Scot's Gaelic word or phrase used, but never without explanation.