"Happiness is a direction, not a place."
-- Sydney J. Harris
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intern commented on the poem titled Subhuman by Seanwhat
Absolutely shocking.The rating says all else.
intern commented on the song titled Black and beautiful by BrokenParadise
The feel of this work is that it's a lamentation,primarily;that gets across very clearly.Your usage of "bleed" in the first and last verses doesn't,quite as well.What part of speech did you intend...
intern posted the poem titled The things I would have said.
An expression of a sense of helplessness
