HatchJ2000 posted the story titled King of the castle
Feb 12, 2019, 9:37:53 PM
Short story
HatchJ2000 commented on the poem titled The Fall by TabbyKatt94
Feb 11, 2019, 8:29:52 PM
I really enjoyed this poem, it told the story well and allowed me to picture what was happening. I also liked the idea of these people being stuck in a loop, as well as the subtle notion that the...
HatchJ2000 posted the poem titled Alone
Feb 11, 2019, 8:19:34 PM
Short poem, quick read.
HatchJ2000 posted the story titled Affliction 3
Feb 9, 2019, 9:50:30 PM
Part 3 of the book I've been working on.
HatchJ2000 commented on the story titled Universal Constants by AlexScribe
Feb 9, 2019, 7:28:47 PM
This is a great short story! A very captivating read, although I had a hard time keeping up with some of the first paragraph. A few sentences really caught my eye, such as, "...flaming into a...
HatchJ2000 commented on their story titled Affliction 2
Feb 9, 2019, 7:19:44 PM
Thank you for commenting @AlexScribe! I took most of your pointers into consideration and made a few edits. Although, I decided to keep, "Shrinking off the sheer..." as I felt it had a different...
HatchJ2000 posted the story titled Affliction 1
Feb 9, 2019, 5:44:33 PM
I apologize for the confusion in advance; This is the first part of the piece, I have already posted the following few paragraphs.
HatchJ2000 commented on the poem titled I by Anushka Srivastava
Feb 8, 2019, 12:15:29 AM
I really enjoyed this piece, although I am not understanding some of the punctuation. Overall, a great concept, I actually have a poem quite like this one!
HatchJ2000 posted the story titled Affliction 2
Feb 7, 2019, 9:35:07 PM
This is a brief excerpt of a book I'm working on, thoughts?
HatchJ2000 posted the poem titled Choice
Feb 6, 2019, 9:37:20 PM
This is a short poem about the choices we make in life affecting us, even in death.