Thanks for the great feedback. I was struggling with the spots you mentioned. I will take another look. Stay safe!
Griffin posted the poem titled Gauntlet
Apr 3, 2020, 3:38:57 PM
About a journey
Griffin posted the poem titled Leaf
Mar 24, 2020, 11:53:07 AM
something I want to send to someone but I'm not ready
Griffin posted the poem titled Rinse & Repeat
Apr 1, 2015, 12:23:27 PM
very short
Griffin posted the poem titled Smokey
Apr 1, 2015, 12:21:26 PM
prose
Griffin commented on their poem titled Emotions
Apr 1, 2015, 12:18:31 PM
thanks for the feedback! I tend to agree with you. I guess the reason I called it a poem was I wrote it as a "person" trying to deal with emotions not just myself. I really do appreciate the...